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Self Editing Tips – 1# – Turf the Non Descript.

September 1, 2010
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Turf or Trash those rubbish words

Editing and redrafting opens ones eyes to all the lazy, flabby words we are all guilty of using.  I’d like to share a tip in tightening up your work and perhaps you might like to add a few more in the comments.

Turf the non-descript words. These are boring, ‘nothing’ words such as ‘nice’ and ‘beautiful’.

Go through the text and on a separate sheet of paper or on a document, list the words as you find them and detail what they are actually supposed to be describing.

A nice person, A nice car? It can mean a myriad of things. Does ‘nice’ mean the personality, the colour, the comfort rating?

A beautiful day, a beautiful girl? We all have different tastes and preferences. I love the soft rain which gently kisses your face in England. I love listening to the pelting torrent on a Queenslander roof. Others don’t enjoy the rain. What is a beautiful day?  What time of day is it?   Does the girl have blond or dark hair?  Short or tall? Heavy set, athletic or slender? Beauty? What’s that constitute exactly?

Non-descript words rob your writing of what makes it unique – your description, flavour and observations. So start to tighten up your work by turfing those rubbish ‘nothing’ words..

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This forms part one of a series of tips on self editing.  Please feel free to add to these as we go along.

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